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Thursday, July 23, 2009

Coping with Homework Assignments

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EAP 1 WRITER’S WORKSHOP

ARGUMENT ESSAY [EDITED]

TUESDAY, JULY 21, 2009

 

Coping with Homework Assignments

 

The problem is about an argument about homework for some kids in school. There is a survey that has questions from families and teachers asking about homework and tells how parents can take care of their kids’ homework (Strauss, 2009). Some governments in other countries recommend homework. There is another problem which is kids do not like homework, but homework is important according to the teachers. If there is no homework, then parents and their kids will not talk about anything about school and that is a problem. There is an issue about teachers who give a lot of homework, but it is good for kids. Some research shows that kids from second grade through fifth grade write very well on their exams, but homework is a huge problem for them. Kids need this homework to improve their skills in their schools (Strauss, 2009). Homework is a good way to make strong bonding between kids and their families. Many families think that homework is wasting their kids’ time, but it is really for good for their kids. They found that if kids have too m uch homework, they will spend a lot of time studying and this is a problem for their parents according to the article (Flynn, 2009). So, people should really think that homework is very helpful for their kids and it helps them to get higher grades in the future in their classes.

I totally disagree with both authors. The authors made really good points, but they talk about how kids can cope with their problems with their homework. And that’s not a good idea, so I came with many ideas that help kids agree with the homework assignment. There are good ideas to help kids cope with homework; first, schools can make classes longer, and second, students should check with teachers and classmates.

 

First, schools can make the classes longer, so they can make fewer homework assignments. For example, if people do not want a lot of homework for their children, then schools should make school time a little bit longer. Also, children should think that if they have many classes, they will get tired, so the homework assignments will be short. So, students will be good at homework if they can cope with it, and a lot of classes should cover their problems. There are a lot of advantages that students can benefit from when they make the classes longer.

Also, students should check with teachers and classmates to help each other. For instance, if kids have a lot of problems with their homework, they should help each other, or go to their own teachers or maybe they can go to their classmates and work together with their homework. Another example is that students should always check with their teachers about their homework, because kids really need to be on the same schedule with the other students and not be behind the schedule. Kids should get help if they have trouble with the homework assignments.

Some people disagree with my ideas; they think that parents think differently because they have to make school time shorter and a lot of homework assignments, so kids can gain a lot of writing experience. And that’s helpful for them in the future. Also, people disagree with something else and that is classmates should not help each other because that will cause many problems for their kids in the future. That is, kids will get used to getting help from each other. Parents need their kids to be individuals, so they can have the skills.

In conclusion, many people want the best for their kids in schools. So, they need to follow these two ideas, because that helps kids to cope with their homework problems. Also, many kids don’t need help from other student “classmates,” so they should really think about how kids can overcome these problems. So, teachers should help students and classmates also.

 

REFERENCES:

 

Flynn, J. (2009, May 27). Homework: When school never ends. Telegraph

Retrieved on July 17, 2009, from http://www.telegraph.co.uk/education/

5369232/Homework-when-school-never-ends.html.


Strauss, V. (2009, January 27). The Homework Debate. The Washington Post.

Retrieved on July 14, 2009, fromhttp://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-

dyn/content/article/2009/01/26/AR2009012602012_pf.html.

Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Easy Ways to Deal with Stress

According to Bernard Seal, when people work as a counselor, they will have stress. That is because they have to defend people in front of judges. They could have a hard situation, and of course they will if they have a complicated document. Even on weekends, they do not get to relax. When they succeed in their cases, they will extremely relaxed. Every counselor has pressure in their job. Also, they do not have too much sleep when when they get back to their houses. So, there are many stressful jobs in their life. People found away to deal with their situations such as training to get rid of their stress. Some studies found that a person may challenge stress, but people with commitment can control it. Many people are likely to stay away from these situations. People can fight their stress when they have a dead member of their families. In general, people should learn how to deal with heir stress in their lives.

Well, people should not control their stress or make them selves tired, because that will take a lot of energy. So, I disagree with the author for many reasons. Also, there are three ways that people should handle stress which are getting some help from a professional doctor, taking some medicines, and drinking energy drinks that doctors recommend.

First, going to a professional doctor is good for a stressful person to get healthy. For example, if people can not control themselves with their stress, or they do not have anyone to help, they should go to a doctor. And that will take a short time to get healthy. Also, when foreigners go to another country, they will get stress because it is new culture for them. So, people should think before they do anything with themselves.

Second, taking some medicines is healthier than doing exercise. For instance, people should really take medicines, because it is quick and very effective. Another example is, some people died just by doing exercise. So, why are people still doing exercise when they ought to take medicines? Medicines are very quick to get rid of stress.

Finally, drinking energy drinks is healthy and very tasty. For example, some doctors recommend that people should drink energy drinks when they feel the stress of academic exams. Also, they ought to drink them if they feel weak in their lives. And these drinks make some people happy, because it helps to put themselves together. Energy drinks are more safer and cheaper than taking medicines and seeing doctors.

In conclusion, if people want to get over their stress, they ought to follow these ideas because they are easy to follow and safer. These ideas help people cope with their stress very well and these ideas are healthier for people who want to overcome their stress.


Seal, B (1998). Coping with stress. In Academic encounters: Human behavior.
(pp. 15 - 16). New York: Cambridge University Press.

Thursday, July 9, 2009

Summary

According to Dan Childs in his article "Did Michael Jackson's Stress Contribute to Cardiac Arrest?," Michael Jackson died because of stress. People believe that he had a heart attack because of drugs or alcohol. Michael Jackson died when he was 50 years old; he was not too old and not too young. Michael Jackson scheduled 50 concerts before he died, according to the author. Many people have died of stress, so that causes huge problems for the world. The author mentions that the ambulance was fast enough that took Michael Jackson to the medical center, but most people die in this situation. there was many of a lot of heart disease that people had problems with. Every year about a quarter million to a half million Americans have the same problem. So, people should be careful of their stress.

Childs, D. (2009, June 25). Did Michael Jackson's Stress Contribute to Cardiac Arrest? ABC News Medical Unit. Retrieved on July 6, 2009, from  http://abcnews.go.com/print?id=7932717.